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A good dark chocolate,
Not the cheap Hershey’s kind
A really good… dark… chocolate…
The kind that pauses a moment
Before melting slowly away
It’s never-sweet taste full, dark,
Mysterious as the depths of a soul

The chocolate melts away
Leaving behind only bitterness
Flooding every corner of your mouth.
Pervasive, inescapable,
Bitter as a lover’s angry words
When they’ve done you wrong,
But you feel guilty anyway…

A good dark chocolate…
Is smooth and strong
Like sex at three in the afternoon
When you’ve got no responsibilities.

But, like sex, it’s over too soon,
Nothing but a bitter memory.
sad.

ate chocolate.

still sad.

wrote poem while eating chocolate.

still sad.
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nejirocklee Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
nice vary butiful relating chcoclet to sex
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
Thank you
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nejirocklee Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2007
you welcom i just love you work
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Raphaella Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2005
I saw the word 'chocolate' while luking thru your gallery, and had to click - however different to what I thought it wud be, this is awesome. The words you use seem to frame chocolate as a sinister thing. The use of 'dark' seems to justify it.

A deep and well written poem. Nice work
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
Thank you
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missy-star Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2005
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I agree with tracar's comment about the metaphor.

But, like sex, it’s over too soon,
Nothing but a bitter memory

Yeah.. I'm sure most girls can understand.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2005
Thanks
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2005   Writer
HAHAHAH like sex?! I feel sorry for the guy more than anything now :P lol!

Anyways, dark chocolate is 3vil anyways!!!
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
An empty poem..but not empty in the bad way- Because it is obviously full of emotion--it is just that that emotion makes me feel empty and frightened... Do you need help/someone to talk to? I'm here for you, as always...
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2005
Thank you Darkness.
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