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A broken dirtied soul,
Throw me to the darkest holes
Itís only what I deserve.

Unworthy of the glory of sunlight,
Iíd bury myself beneath a mountain
If it werenít for fear of desecrating it,
So hide me in the rancid swamps
Where I need never fear the sunís mocking.

Bury me up with rotting things
To save the moonlightís shame
At looking upon my filthiness.
Nothing so pure, so innocent,
Was meant to grace any such as I.

The stars would turn their light away
If they could see what lies inside of me,
This craven whore, devouring joy
From all those who surround me.
No good light deserves to fall on me.

The burning lurid gaze of a demon,
Forever raking my tortured frame
Is the only light I should ever see
I disgrace any purer light.

Lock me in an ancient dungeon,
Where murder was done
And good men killed,
Itís sullied floors will my haven be,
Itís bloodied walls comforting, surround me.

A broken dirtied soul,
Hide me away forever
Never look at me again.
Itís only what I deserve.
felt bad then. feel better now. Yay for PMS.
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tracar Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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tracar Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey, this is an awesome piece! :D I really like this part-

A broken dirtied soul,
Hide me away forever
Never look at me again.
Itís only what I deserve.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2005
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it.
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missy-star Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2004
Ah ha.. this is something us girls can relate to!
Thankyou!!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2004
Thank you
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lesbian-harlequin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2004
Wow..you sound angry...that's about how I feel most of the time..with such fantastic people at home..it's almost PMS 24-7 :nod: nice piece here:clap: :nod: :hug:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2004
Thank you. I guess this poem can sound a number of diferent ways depending on the mood one reads it in.
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lesbian-harlequin Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2004
:nod:
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Blu-Winters Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Aww very nice poem :clap: ! I loved the imagery in it, and also the way things flow. I'm happy you're feeling better and uhm, I dun't get PMS but yay for it anyway :Aww:

-Prince
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Thank you for the fav and for droping by to comment.
and I'm glad you can relate, even if you dont get PMS.
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Trellia Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mmm, very dark... this accurately described how I feel sometimes too...
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2004
I'm glad you can relate. thanks for stoping by to comment.
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
Exelent poem...very emotional, puts forward how you were feeling...

Glad your feeling better- thats not a nice way to feel...
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
no, it isnt a nice way to feel, luckily it only strikes occasionally and briefly.

Thank you for commenting.
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2004
(comforts) (patpat)
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2004
Thanks... but I'm fine now, really.
*cavorts about in a seemingly happy manner*
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
--seemingly?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
You can never really tell what someone is feeling by their actions, you can guess, but never quite know.
meh, whatever, I really am better now.
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Kaiya61 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2004
its lovely, even though its obviously depressing i like it a lot and i think its very easy to relate to.
You're a wonderufl poet :) i love all of your work
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2004
Thank you
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EmeraldWolf Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I didn't know PMS would make you freak out like this. I must be extra nice to me g/f when she gets it.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004
PMS is a strange thing. Sometimes it's nothing and other times it takes over your life.
So yes, definitely be nicer to your gf when she has it.
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EmeraldWolf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
I promise I will.
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faeryzeph912 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004
good thing your feeling better. this was a great poem, cuz a lot of ppl can relate to it. i know i can.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004
Thank you, I'm glad you can relate.
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faeryzeph912 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004
no prob!
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004   Writer
No... yay for feeling better now. Because that's a very bad emotion to be going through.

The poem, however, is extremely excellent from the standpoint of someone's who's been there before but could never find the words to express it. *applause*
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2004
Thank you very much my friend.
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