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In the dark
Search the stars
On this moonless cloudy night
For the magic
Of the elves
As they play the glimmering light
Like a top
Like a song
Those who can see all delight
In the whispered lighting fancies they behold.

It’s the elves
Who control
The light that’s in the dark
And their magic
That we see
With each beating of our heart
So look up
In the night
Leave the city find a park
And loose your conscience in the magic of the elves
This is the prize promised for getting my 666th pageview. the prize goes to xxkorinxx, (thank you, I hope you're not disapointed in the poem.)
she gave me a list of words to include.

Elves
Magick
Moon
Night
Stars
Light
Dark
Ying and Yang

I got them all but Ying and Yang. (sorry)
this poem is a bit diferent than my usual style.
anyway, I'll quit ranting.

ENJOY!
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DustOfTheMoonlight Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
I don't know your other poems but that you changed your style a little was a great idea. It's really great. I love the last sentence.
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2004   Writer
Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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fat-lionell Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
that one is alot more light hearted than yours usually are. Almost as light hearted as mine.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
It's not in my usual style because of the word list and all such.
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Kriasai Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
Nice rythm. Sounds like the elves are having a party! XD
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
yeah, an elvish star-party!
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Kriasai Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
An elvish rave, perhaps?
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
As close as they come to having raves.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner May 4, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
(shivers) Hatehatehatehateeeeee elfs. Its an exelent poem but i dislike elfs. They tried to kill poor darky. (<-Its a story currently in progress)
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
There are several kinds of elves, you know. I am talking about the magical little ones who control the stars, who have never tried to kill anyone.
They are cousins of other elves.

I can hardly wait to read the story about the elfs who tried to kill you. I'm sure it'll be really good.
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