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When I look in his eyes
-Eyes of shattered glass blue-
I know somehow that his words are true.
I see in his eyes
What I've not seen before.
I see the old things
But also much more.

In the dark eyes before his
I saw only greed
(Desire and lust are more what I mean).

Now in his eyes I see that too,
But only after looking through
The love, respect, and tenderness
That accompanies each caress
When his fingers dance across my face.
The love that's ours is not a race
To add a conquest to his list,
No, but to savor every kiss.
So I think that this could last
Unlike the others in my past.
This is something I've been working on forever and I'm still not pleased with it, but I dont think it'll get any better.
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004   Writer
Poet is art, Art is poetry in motion.....both are peoples work from there souls.....and yours is beautiful!

Bravo!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004
Thank you
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004   Writer
Pleasure ^_~!
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seekingtruth Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2004
:aww: I like love poems ^_^
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2004
Thanks.
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Rebelfairy Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2004
I think this poem is really great! It's got lots of deep feelings inside it. Good work! :floating:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2004
Thanks,
that's what I try to do.
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Blind-Seraphim Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2004
Very awesome poem ^_^ thank you for adding me to your friends, I believe I am going to return the gesture as well! Blue eyes do seem to cut the best, don't they?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2004
Yeah, I am a fan of blue eyes.
thanks for commenting.
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2004
it's good, you shoudl ike it, and be happy with it
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