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There is a war
With casualties unnumbered.
Each side’s the worst off
And each side’s the best.

Armies laughing and shooting
They’re slashing and burning
The pain, it is something that wont go away.

One side has cannons,
The other has bombs.
They fire and fire
With desperate desire
Their trenches go higher.
They’re dying, and filing the earth with their bones.

Each blast cuts me deeper
I’m down on my knees.
Haven’t you heard?
It’s all inside of me.

Can’t you see that you’re killing what’s inside of me?
This is just how I feel sometimes.
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White-Shores Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2004   Writer
This is how I look at war as well!!! Awesome!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2004
I think everyone gets something different from any given poem, Thanks for commenting.
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2004
that's so cool i like the twist at the end. if you didn't read that title that is(like i didnt lol)
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2004
Thanks. yeah, I almost didnt give it that title... maybe I shouldnt have.
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004   Writer
Im glad its not very often....i am in my own hell too.
But great poetry of ya soul if i can say....v beautiful!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004
Thank you.
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2004   Writer
Again....a Pleasure ^_~!
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Ramuel Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2004
Hmmm. That doesnt sound very happy. :aww: :hugs: Me make better?
Good poem, though, I really like it.
:explosion:
-Ramuel
P.S. You spelled filling wront on the last line of the third stanza...
Sorry, I just notice these things... :shrug:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2004
Thank you for noticing that I spelled a word wrong. I dont notice things like that, and I'm always glad when people tell me.
it isnt very happy, but I dont feel like that very often.
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2004
Wow, that's really good! Very deep.
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