There is a war
With casualties unnumbered.
Each side’s the worst off
And each side’s the best.
Armies laughing and shooting
They’re slashing and burning
The pain, it is something that wont go away.
One side has cannons,
The other has bombs.
They fire and fire
With desperate desire
Their trenches go higher.
They’re dying, and filing the earth with their bones.
Each blast cuts me deeper
I’m down on my knees.
Haven’t you heard?
It’s all inside of me.
Can’t you see that you’re killing what’s inside of me?
But great poetry of ya soul if i can say....v beautiful!
Good poem, though, I really like it.
-Ramuel
P.S. You spelled filling wront on the last line of the third stanza...
Sorry, I just notice these things...
it isnt very happy, but I dont feel like that very often.