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January 22, 2004
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There is a war
With casualties unnumbered.
Each side’s the worst off
And each side’s the best.

Armies laughing and shooting
They’re slashing and burning
The pain, it is something that wont go away.

One side has cannons,
The other has bombs.
They fire and fire
With desperate desire
Their trenches go higher.
They’re dying, and filing the earth with their bones.

Each blast cuts me deeper
I’m down on my knees.
Haven’t you heard?
It’s all inside of me.

Can’t you see that you’re killing what’s inside of me?
:iconpanther-nora:
This is just how I feel sometimes.
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:iconwhite-shores:
This is how I look at war as well!!! Awesome!
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:iconpanther-nora:
I think everyone gets something different from any given poem, Thanks for commenting.
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:icontiger-queen:
that's so cool i like the twist at the end. if you didn't read that title that is(like i didnt lol)
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thanks. yeah, I almost didnt give it that title... maybe I shouldnt have.
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:icontearfromaheartlessso:
Im glad its not very often....i am in my own hell too.
But great poetry of ya soul if i can say....v beautiful!
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:icontearfromaheartlessso:
Again....a Pleasure ^_~!
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:iconramuel:
Hmmm. That doesnt sound very happy. :aww: :hugs: Me make better?
Good poem, though, I really like it.
:explosion:
-Ramuel
P.S. You spelled filling wront on the last line of the third stanza...
Sorry, I just notice these things... :shrug:
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you for noticing that I spelled a word wrong. I dont notice things like that, and I'm always glad when people tell me.
it isnt very happy, but I dont feel like that very often.
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:iconkriasai:
Wow, that's really good! Very deep.
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