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Leave me alone
Give me shaded rocky corners
In the shadow of the wind
Let the sun shine back upon me
You know you took it from me old friend
Please leave me. And dont come back again.

Like stone cattle through stormcloud valleys
You keep running through my mind
And I used to like the feeling but
It's hurting me this time
Take your noise and your pain
And do not haunt my mind again.

Like some maddened ancient butcher
You cut for my heart again
I once gave it to you but now
I take it back again.
Get your knife from out my chest
And do not cut at me again.

Like sandstorms from distant deserts
You callus my skin to steel
It can be usefull I admit but I
Have got to think of him.
Let my flesh grow back to softness
And do not harden me again.  

Leave me alone
Give me shaded rocky corners
In the shadow of the wind
Let the sun shine back upon me
You know you took it from me old friend.
Loneliness. Please dont come back again.
I sat down and wrote some poetry, which ended up into a song that I havent put to music yet, because I havent writen any poetry for a while.
the first and last stanzas are the chorus.
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disposableteen87 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2004
really cool... I liked it alot
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2004
Thanks, and thanks for the +fav.
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TeArFrOMaHeARtLesSSo Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2004   Writer
*claps to a standing ovation*

Ya rally talented at what ya do....stright from the heart is where its best....eh?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2004
*blushes*
Thank you so much James
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2004   Writer
OOh, very, very nice. I especially like the imagry.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2004
Thank you
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zarimi Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2004
Hey, i havent written in ages, but i had to come back here to see your work. Wow, i really really like this. Its like what im feeling right now, and reading it, it really makes me feel better. Its good to get your feelings out. I hope that after you wrote this, it felt better

Let my flesh grow back to softness
And do not harden me again.

Leave me alone
Give me shaded rocky corners
In the shadow of the wind
Let the sun shine back upon me
You know you took it from me old friend.
Loneliness. Please dont come back again.


i think that part is my favourite, that stanza and those two lines. Heh, yea, i really like the last two lines too. haha, i really hope that if you put it into song you can find a way to put it on here too... by awesome computer skills maybe?

heh anyway, great piece of writing!
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2004
Thank you so much. I might try to get it on here if I had awesome computer skills, but I dont...
I can always try though.
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2004
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I'm sure it'll make a lovely song.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2004
Thanks Liz
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Ramuel Featured By Owner May 27, 2004
I like it, Hanna. Cant wait to hear it sometime.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2004
I hope I can get it to guitar like I can hear it in my head. I still havent had a chance to work on it.

:smooch:
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner May 25, 2004
Exelently written.....Very depressive-brings back old past memorys...
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 25, 2004
Thanks man.

depressive... life is such, I suppose.
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner May 25, 2004
...at times it is... But one must always hold to the hope...
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 25, 2004
You're right. Thank you.
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner May 26, 2004
(smiles slightly) I try...
In my current situation that i'm in, i've got to keep up my hopes... and it is hard, I know that, but if people give up hope---what do they have? They spend the rest of their lives wondering what would have happened if they hadn't given up on everything and everyone...
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Hopefulmirage Featured By Owner May 24, 2004   Writer
You keep running through my mind
And I used to like the feeling but
It's hurting me this time


Very beautiful. Very accurate. From personal Experience?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 24, 2004
Thanks.

Yeah, it's from experience.
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soloenCristo Featured By Owner May 24, 2004
wow. a definite "de ja vu" for those of us who've been there. great work.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner May 24, 2004
Thank you.
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