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I sit on the lonely mountain top
When I need to think, to stop.

While they sit in their dark halls
And close themselves in walls
Squabbling about their petty laws,
The sun in the snow gleams on my face
Far apart from the frantic race
To right or left I chose to go
Iím not caught up in the flow.

Donít try to make me come back down
Iíll sit here on the mountainís crown
Iíll breathe the air and smell the flower
As is sit atop my lonely tower.
For here it is I found my joy
And here I need no pretty toy
To fit right in, for thereís just me.
Alone, and happy as can be.
This is something I wrote a while back, but I thought I might as well put it on the site.
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agnostic-chuck Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2004
i like it. i think we all have a place likle that where we go to hide and be with ourselves.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2004
I think we'd all go crazy if we didnt
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2003  Hobbyist Photographer
Happyness- now far off that seems to me...

Its a good poem.... But i dont understand how one can be happy-when alone...
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2004
Your question has been bugging me for a while, and then I figured it out!

There comes a point that, after you have been hurt so much, it's more peaceful (if not exactly happy) to be alone.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
But surely, alone is.... Destroyed...

If your alone... If you have no one, then surely there is no point in living?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2004
That's true, but nobody's alone forever. This poem is just waiting until the right one comes allong, and not letting just anyone into your heart to tear it in a thousand itty pieces.

I dont want this poem to say, "being alone forever is best" because it isnt. It surely and most definitely isnt. Just sometimes it's Ok to be alone with your thoughts to sort yourself and be ready for the world.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
I can't stand being alone, ever...
I can be surrounded by people, and be alone, yet i can be in a dark locked room with padding on the walls and be in company....... All in spirit......

Still, at the moment, i'm not alone... Guess i can relax- (yet i can't -_-)

(ponders)

My heart has been torn into twothousand little bits already--- Hope i never have to feel it torn again-twice was enough -_-
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2003
Oh wow, that's so good! Like I feel sometimes.
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cryingblood-bleeding Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2003
i really like this...that is how i feel (at times)..i think everybody has a placed they go to..
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