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Feast your eyes on this.
Can you see my hips swing
When I'm walking?
Cant you see my lips smile
when you're talking
to me?
Don't you know what it means?

My hand's sitting right there.
Want to hold it?
You can.
My shirt's falling off my shoulder
you could run your fingers up it.
My lips are good at kissing
if you want to.

And while we're kissing
would it be a terrible thing
if my shirt came off,
and yours too?
Our hands and mouths could explore
what our eyes have hinted at.
I could find your pleasures,
and you mine.

Remember my hips?
They do more than swing.
My legs do more than walk,
they could wrap around
your tanned gymnast's body.
Are you man enough
to plunder my treasures?
We'll both be richer than before.
Boys are clueless, and it dosnt get any better when you (and they) get older.

This poem came about because I was thinking I would pretty much have to say this poem to a certain guy if I wanted him to notice that I was more than just a cook.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
(chuckles) I must say, definately well done...

It feels good to be back on DA. I must say I've missed your poems.

As for clueless guys I probably wouldn't know considering my decisively inhuman nature, but I certainly know how to read people when they're thinking that way (smiles weakly)
5tick Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2006
How provocative. Nice imagery, and its not in a smutty way either.

Well done :D I enjoyed reading it
Shinoki87 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2006   Writer
Quite good. As a guy, I will try to keep my head up for when a girl is "marking the spot with an X". ;)

Yeah it is true, alot of us guys are dense, but that's because women are nebulous, and we are not. You can hint at it a hundred times, but if you don't hit the right spot, it will totally miss. Then again, alot of the time when we flirt, girl's miss the point also. Happens to me waaaaay too often. Everyone should have a best friend of the opposite sex so that they can understand everyone's signals. :P
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2006
Every girl is different. Some are much more shy than others, and the fear of rejection makes it easy to be very vague (nebulous, I like that word), make one or two cautious hints, and when they are ignored (or not understood as such) give it up as a bad job.
tiger-queen Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2006
I like that very muchly and I sooooo know the feeling!

funnily enough it was last with my boyfriend, took long enough though ;P
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
I'm glad you like... there's probably not a girl over 14 who dosnt know the feeling. (and the 14 is being generous)
tiger-queen Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006
haha yea, but when you get older you can tell the differnece between 14yrold feelings, and other, more dangerous ones
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006
MezraStorm Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2006
I'm guessing you met someone at camp? I really really like this.. I've wanted to say this to some of the guys I've liked in the past. It's like they can't get the freaking hint. X_X
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2006
Yeah. He's not the first I've wanted to yell it at.

The situation is kind of interesting with him, because kind-of I want to do stuf with him, and kind-of I already have a boyfriend I just dont get to see him very often.
MezraStorm Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2006
Ooers.. sounds very complicated.

I would say go with the guy that there now, but I guess it depends on how long you've been with your boyfriend and a whole lot of other mess.
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
It is a lot of mess, but I'll pull through. :)
MezraStorm Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006
I hope so. :hug:
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