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Look,
beneath my dark leaves
beware the thorns

Find
sweet ruby clusters
skin tight and shiny

Taste
as rich as the earth I grow in
as sweet as the sun that feeds me

Savor
every drop of juice
as precious as the dawn

Take
all you can carry
spread my children
I have given them all I can
Over this summer, I have found myself wondering what it would be like to be different things. like the worms I'm digging up in the garden, or the raspberry bush I'm glutting myself from. This is the only poem I have completed from this line of though, and I'm interested to hear what you all think of it.
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Blu-Winters Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2005
Well described and chosen concept. I love reading your stuff as always and this was nice, simple and complementing. good work.

-Prince
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005
Thank you Winters, I appreciate it.
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:iconblu-winters:
Blu-Winters Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005
No problem :D

-Prince
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jetblackmagik Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2005
nice structure with a single verb starting each stanza...I wrote about fruit recently as well [link]
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