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:iconpanther-nora:
The What-if's in life always scare me, but they seem much worse today.
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:iconraphaella:
The repeation creates an echo in my mind, and the broken/unfinished lines sound great when you say them in your head. I think the reader almost says them instead of reads them (I did). Interesting work here.
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:iconpanther-nora:
I'm glad you think so. Thank you for stopping by.
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:iconarlis:
Oooh...dat's cool. I really likey! ^-^
Have ya read the one by Shel Silverstein? I think it's called "The What-If's" as well. It's funneh.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Yeah, I have read shel silversteins What if poem. It's pretty cool.
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:iconsecretagent-loverman:
Perfect. The very idea is perfect, and yes those are horrible with a slight dash of evil. I hate em just as you put~
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:iconpanther-nora:
Yeah, that's why I wrote the poem. Thank you for your nice comment.
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:iconkriasai:
"What if"s are evil, evil I tell ya! I spend a lot of time in my life worrying. Seriously. Especially about my family.
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:iconpanther-nora:
yeah... evil what-if's. (stabs them in the eye with a fork :evillaugh: ) sorry, I'm feeling somewhat violent today.
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:iconmelanophrionsa:
What ifs--- (shivers)


Hate thinking of "What if"'s.
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