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The What-if's in life always scare me, but they seem much worse today.
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Raphaella Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2005
The repeation creates an echo in my mind, and the broken/unfinished lines sound great when you say them in your head. I think the reader almost says them instead of reads them (I did). Interesting work here.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
I'm glad you think so. Thank you for stopping by.
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arlis Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2004
Oooh...dat's cool. I really likey! ^-^
Have ya read the one by Shel Silverstein? I think it's called "The What-If's" as well. It's funneh.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2004
Yeah, I have read shel silversteins What if poem. It's pretty cool.
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SecretAgent-loverman Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2004   Photographer
Perfect. The very idea is perfect, and yes those are horrible with a slight dash of evil. I hate em just as you put~
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2004
Yeah, that's why I wrote the poem. Thank you for your nice comment.
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
"What if"s are evil, evil I tell ya! I spend a lot of time in my life worrying. Seriously. Especially about my family.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2004
yeah... evil what-if's. (stabs them in the eye with a fork :evillaugh: ) sorry, I'm feeling somewhat violent today.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
What ifs--- (shivers)


Hate thinking of "What if"'s.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
Yeah, me too.
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Squirellmeister Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
Kool. I really like. What Ifs are scary but they are something that can never happen. ie. What if i'd left earlier.

You didnt and theres nothing you can do about it. So its easiest to forget about the phrase what if entirley. Things turn out how they turn out.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2004
True, but there are some what if's that could still happen, and I worry about those.
Thanks for the comment.
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