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I try to be so strong
Only cry when Iím alone
I try to never give up
But sometimes I canít go on.
If I can see it coming
I can take most anything.
Itís lifeís nastier surprises
That have me on my knees.

When demons of my past
Come knocking on the door
I try to keep them locked outside
But theyíre crawling through the floor
Iím lost here in this darkened room
I used to call my mind
I need someone to save me
Or theyíll kill me this time.

Where Iíll be tomorrow
Is something I donít know
ĎCause life never seems to
Want to let me take it slow.
Without seeing the future
All I have with meís the past.
In the present Iím alive still
And thatís all that I can ask.

So hold me tightly close to you
Tell me everythingís OK
Tell me that you love me
And I can stand another day.
You know Iíd never make it
Half this far all on my own.
So tell me that you love me
And Iíll keep stumbling on.
I have no idea what to call this submission.
It is a song. the last verse is actually the chorus.
I've been throwing an idea for a song like this for a week or so, and finally sat down to write it yesterday and this morning. I think it turned out a bit more... depressed... than I wanted it to be, but sometimes you just have to write what comes out...
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2004
aww i love that!!! it's a wonderful song. :D :D :D
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2004
Thank you so much and thanks for the +fav
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004
no probs :D
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2004
Sad, but still beautiful.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2004
Thank you for saying it's beautiful.
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Ramuel Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2004
Yay! Beautiful sounding song. You definitely should hold it in higher regard.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2004
Wow,
I either had a realy weird deja vu or we've already had this conversation...
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Blind-Seraphim Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2004
Nice :clap: Hey, sadness and depression is a part of life.. without it... it'd be entirely....impudent o_o But that's awesome. I could never write a song to save my life.. ^_^
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2004
Thanks,
I just think sometimes that I should write happy stuf because there is such an overabundance of depressed writings.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Depressive........

Life is as such---

Reminds me of something.........
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