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I was the stone,
I felt nothing I moved not.  
My heart was hardened in my chest
And when I slept I took no rest.
I existed,
My heart was cold and moved not.
And when I saw other’s pain
I laughed until I died again.
I felt nothing.

So long ago I only remember
Those days have passed and gone.
Now when I see the pain in others
I almost can’t help but cry along.

It hurts so bad
To see you falling to the ground
I am powerless to help you
You struggle on in hope to get through.
Please don’t give up.
My unfamiliar emotions warring
I don’t understand all this
It almost makes me wish
That I was stone.

So long ago I only remember
Those days have passed and gone.
Now when I see the pain in others
I almost can’t help but cry along.
:iconpanther-nora:
THis is something I just wrote, I may try to make it into a song at some point.
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:iconfaithdivine88:
powerful. :heart: word play is used very beautifully in this piece, especially repetition. the lines flow in perfect transition. really great work. :hug:
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:icontiger-queen:
aww that is such an awsome piece, very emotional. :)
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:iconblind-seraphim:
Very nicely done. I'm impressed solely because it flows so well. Awesome writing skills you have, as usual.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you, I worked hard on trying to make it flow-y.
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:iconkriasai:
This makes me want to cry as well.. It's really really good.
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:iconpanther-nora:
:hug: thank you Kriasai
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:iconkriasai:
Call me Liz. :) :hug:
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:iconramuel:
Nice one, Hanna.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you Tyler.
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