I see you
Tough on the outside,
But inside, good.
You hurt, same as everyone
For all you keep it hidden.
I see you give
Trying so hard to help others
Paying no mind to your own wounds.
Youíll kill yourself this way.
Accept the help thatís offered.
Get out of your shell.
It may seem safe but that shell
Locks comfort out
And all the poison in.
Take it, damn you.
Cant you see?
I am a taker, I never give.
To you, I offer one small thing.
It hurts me as much to offer
As it hurts you to ignore.
You would hate me if you knew me
But that is not the case.
In this context you could like me
Talk to me.
No one you know need ever hear.
It burns to see you hurt yourself
Pull yourself slowly apart at the seams.
So I give you one last offer.
Before I turn away
To hide my tears.
THis is something I wrote very quickly for someone who may never see it, and if they do it is unlikely they would understand that it was for them. I put it out anyway.
very nice expression. great.
Is this about Mr. Bair?
I didnt write it with him in mind, but I suppose it could be.
Love this poem... The best i've heard in a long long time... I would scream congratulations at you if it wasnt for me putting myself into emotionlesnes to hidemypain- but instead of that, i'll do what comes to mind and make it a fav, and worship it for 4 working days.
Thank you... Do you mind if I call you Darkness? if so, what should I call you?
Soulful? I meant mournful. o_O
Thank you Kriasai. I guess I was able to portray what I wanted to even though I didnt spend too much time on it.
So sad, so soulful. This is really good.