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I see you
Tough on the outside,
But inside, good.
You hurt, same as everyone
Maybe deeper
For all you keep it hidden.

I see you give
Trying so hard to help others
Paying no mind to your own wounds.
Youíll kill yourself this way.

Accept the help thatís offered.
Talk,
Get out of your shell.
It may seem safe but that shell
Locks comfort out
And all the poison in.

Take it, damn you.
Cant you see?
I am a taker, I never give.
To you, I offer one small thing.
Believe me,
It hurts me as much to offer
As it hurts you to ignore.

You would hate me if you knew me
But that is not the case.
In this context you could like me
Talk to me.
No one you know need ever hear.
It burns to see you hurt yourself
Pull yourself slowly apart at the seams.
So I give you one last offer.
Before I turn away
To hide my tears.
THis is something I wrote very quickly for someone who may never see it, and if they do it is unlikely they would understand that it was for them. I put it out anyway.
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allshadesofgrey Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2004   Traditional Artist
very nice expression. great. :)
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2004
Thank you.
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Ramuel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004
Is this about Mr. Bair?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004
I didnt write it with him in mind, but I suppose it could be.
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Ramuel Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
Who's it supposed to be about?
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
Nobody you know.
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this poem... The best i've heard in a long long time... I would scream congratulations at you if it wasnt for me putting myself into emotionlesnes to hidemypain- but instead of that, i'll do what comes to mind and make it a fav, and worship it for 4 working days.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004
Thank you... Do you mind if I call you Darkness? if so, what should I call you?
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
(aka wooho i am back to refering to myself as a single body)
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
(shrugs) Just call me Darkness, i don't mind-
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