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My body is yours
Do with it as you will,
But my soul is my own,
The one part of me you cannot touch,
The one part of me thatís mine.

You may try to break it,
Scream obscenities in my face.
You may beat me until I cry aloud
But you will not leave a trace.
My soul is flying in the sky
Itís far away from you.

You can beat me, starve me, hate me,
You can shame me before all,
But my soul is flying in the sky
And it will never fall.


Cut me, rape me, kill me even,
Do the worst that you can do.
My soul is soaring through the sky,
So far away from you.

My body is yours
Do with it as you will,
But my soul is mine.
And you will never touch it.
I dont know what this is. I dont know where I came from. I just sat down to the computer and this wrote. Please tell me what you think.
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:icontiger-queen:
I think this is powerful, and becuase you mention the word 'rape' it makes it a much stronger piece. I love the whole idea of them not being able to have your soul. It's well written. :+fav:
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you my friend.
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:iconmelanophrionsa:
Melanophrionsa Feb 4, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
The soul, the pure, the best (grins) That is an... Undescribibly good poem- I'm adding it to my favs -
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you so much!
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:iconmelanophrionsa:
Melanophrionsa Feb 4, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
(nods)
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:iconrebelfairy:
Your great at writing poems and i really like this one!
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thank you very much
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:iconpanpanthepirate:
this is really good. very well written, your very talented.
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:iconpanther-nora:
*blushes*
thank you.
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:iconsecretagent-loverman:
Powerful statement, well constructed too. Congrats'~
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