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February 29, 2004
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Who would I be?
I would be a woman of the earth.
Planting seeds, nurturing life;
I would sense the warmth in seedlings
Feel the blood of trees cool against my cheek
So close beneath their skin.

What would I be?
I would be a woman of the earth.
Feeling nature’s love,
I would radiate that love to others.
Feeling the pull of the moon on the oceans,
Sense a stirring in my own blood.
And in summers heat and in winter’s cold
Rest in the peace of all ages combined.

What would I be?
I would be a woman of the earth.
My roots firmly fixed in the soil,
Weathering out storms
I would feel the great pounding heart of the earth herself
Protecting me.

Who would I be?
I would be a woman of the earth.
With dirt under my nails,
And sunburn on my back,
I would earn my bread
By the sweat of my brow
In joy
To the end of my days.
:iconpanther-nora:
This is something I've been throwing around my head for about a week, only I just now sat down to write it.
There is room for lots of improvement I know, so please tell me what you think.
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:icontiger-queen:
nice writing! it's a great poem :D
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:icontearfromaheartlessso:
Thast kewl....Bravo!!
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:icontearfromaheartlessso:
Pleasure ^_^ for such a talented, sexy lady!
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:iconpanther-nora:
thank you James!
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:iconkriasai:
Love the imagery, in this.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thanks, I was trying to make my poetry more image oriented because so much of my poetry is completely statement.

*has spent too much time in writing class*
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:icons0346814:
Love the imagery, and the repetition gives it a good flowing rythm. I cant see how it could be improved, but then im no expert at this! Click on my name above and maybe you could give me some tips!!
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:iconpanther-nora:
Thanks for the comment. I didnt realize it had any rhythm at all until I read it out loud.
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