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I know these four walls
I built them.

I know these four walls
Know these ancient blood stains
The blood was mine.

I know these four walls
Know the smooth parts
Washed by a thousand tears
The tears were mine.

I know these four walls.

I know these four walls
Know the false comfort
Know the deceptive peace
Once found inside.

I know these four walls
Know the pain they lock inside
The pain they breed.

I know these four walls
I built them.

Set me free.
I just sat down and wrote this. At the moment I like it, but I may not in the morning and it may be deleted soon.
It pretty much says how I feel right now.
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Sammy-Jo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2004   Writer
Great :clap:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2004
thanks
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Sammy-Jo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2004   Writer
Welcome
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missy-star Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2004
Lovely repitition, and the way it ends - 'set me free'.
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:iconpanther-nora:
Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2004
That's just how it felt at the moment.
Thank you.
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DarknessCyShadow Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2004
I used to have a room just like that...

I fell into it shortly after my life was destroyed by loss.... I thought there was no way out- But there was--- I got out-and since then life has improved for me.

Its a great poem---I've always said that great poems make the reader think- and it made me think quite a bit.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2004
I'm glad it made you think. Thank you.
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Kriasai Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2004
Jeesh, I am in such awe of you!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2004
Thanks Liz.
*blushes* I didnt think it was THAT good.
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Kyaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2004
hello
great job--a lot of depth, such depth of feelings is usually lost when articulated but you pulled through
awesome.

p.s. i figure if you created the walls, you are the only one who can set yourself free, as cliche as it sounds :giggle:

L8R
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2004
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you're right about me being the only person who could let myself free, but life dosnt like to make that easy.
thanks for dropping by to comment.
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Kyaku Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2004
hello
great job--a lot of depth, such depth of feelings is usually lost when articulated but you pulled through
awesome.

p.s. i figure if you created the walls, you are the only one who can set yourself free, as cliche as it sounds :giggle:

L8R
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2004
that was amazing. it's lyk someone locked inside their head (|which is probably the point) but it's great. well done!
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tiger-queen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2004
yay! :D :hug:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2004
Thank you! :hug: I think you're the only person who really got what I was saying.
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nellaf Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2004
Wow.. Beautiful, I like it lots!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2004
Thank you very much.
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nellaf Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2004
welcomes =)
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BOOSHNOODLE Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Hey, that was...you know I can't explain it but I felt it..ya know? If I had to put a word to it, it would be, heh I still don't know, it was great.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Thank you,
It's good to see you around again.
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EmeraldWolf Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Nice poem, very emotional, I feel you poured out alot of pain into this one. Good job.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Thank you my friend
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Ramuel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Good one, Hanna.

:katana:
:cuddle:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2004
Thank you Tyler
:smooch:
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2004   Writer
Damn, that's amazing. It sort of embodies the feelings of entrapment people feel, but at the same time it shows that there's a history there. Not a happy history, but it's a history nonetheless, adn that history is also part of what traps the person, because you can't escape pain.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2004
Thank you
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2004   Writer
You're quite welcome.
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